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darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

0 posted 2004-08-11 03:48 AM

I hate this
A dark shadow drawn over everything
Everything I do
Everything I feel
I just want to crawl away
And then in walks you

All my effort turns to you
You and your experience in acting
You and your experience in faking
Something that should be taken seriously
You flirt with suicide
You take it for a ride

You need attention
Just as much as I need a break
You stare me in the eyes
Dare me to say something
And I just want to crawl away

You surround yourself with people who dote on you
People who adore you
People you tease
People you wind round your finger
You enjoy manipulating them

I hate how I feel inclined to help you
When you dont need or want help
And those who do
Are scared of you
And the power you hold
And I just want to crawl away

I want you to see
How your little game
Affects all those around you
I am cursed to feel this way
And you inflicted it upon yourself
Now its your turn to cry

You flirt with suicide
And I just want to crawl away

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-08-12 12:49 PM

wow

wow... powerful as hell.

written about anyone or just rambles or about urself?

wow

"When i close my eyes, i remember how to smile, under my umbrella im an accomplished exile..."

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

2 posted 2004-08-12 02:43 PM

really good. and silhouetted she cant answer with about my self because then it would be taken off the site like one of my recnt ones. anyways. this is awsome. and i hope you do eventually crawl away if you can.

"I am the bringer of darkness. A shadow in the dark. I prey on the. The child of the lost souls. I hunger for the love of one unknown. The one to reve

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-08-12 11:56 PM

Sorry that I haven't replied to this yet. I'm glad you posted, you don't post as often as I do, which is probably better, but either way I love reading them.

Erm..anyway, about what you said yesterday on MSN. They were just lyrics (depressing ones at that) and you were just uncooperative, not...a ****. Sorry can't write it properly.

Hollow. Courtney.

P.S. Can they really delete your poem if it is about you???? Confusing....

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

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