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my reflection |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
ive bottled it down for so long that when the tears force their way to the surface i feel relief it all comes crashing down like a wave on the shore and i havent cried like this in years big heart-wrenching sobs quake my body and i just have to look at myself in the mirror i stand wincing, scared of wat it might reveal and wen i look im stunned, its me, not me on the outside but wats inside my face is ripped raw my eyes streaming blood my skin stretched taunt over my cheekbone and my lips swollen my heart is on my sleeve and my hands a picture of time and weather my heart is bruised and battered and my feet blistered from running away from myself i want to scream in stead i stand frozen shoked and sobbing but for the first time i see whos really inside of me *note: sry guys, this isnt my best but im edging myself bak into the writing scene. thoughts wod be good. great to be back. Darkness* nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is really different. i love it though... its really good to see you writing again, this is a relly deep poiece and i loved reading it... keep up your writing if you ever want to talk to someone you can send me an email cheers Mel so this is me but what do you care about that???? |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Great great great to see you back! Is this why I am a legend? Wow, amazing piece, totally original, and hauntingly awesome imagery. Courts xxx Hollow "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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