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In the Eyes of the Broken
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In the Eyes of the Broken |
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Third Libra Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 125South Carolina |
In the eyes of the broken my eyes are kept so broken So fragile in a blackness be my heart as it beats slowly heartbroken For it shall never speak, only silent in the shadows, gray and unspoken Swollen from the blistered wounds and the words of the one I love Doused in the ugliness bound, forever kept within my soul I rip and tear my flesh, tormented by the scarred and old Their chorus, may it be, of my failures and desires of you so bold The beast, so I am, continuing to tear apart your hope Still, our lovely secrets be painted upon the walls permanently By all of this world may it be seen, though it be so blind, burned into thus obscurity To remind me of the bittersweet kisses and of the razorblades so rusty and bloody Still of the time we danced in the dark for our hollow secret love Never, not ever; now shall I know, Cold our existence be so everlasting and everlong Much for the darkness to mock and murder so wrong Never shall this hole be filled: you could never save me for long Never for long at all… For we died after all… Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear. |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
wow wow wow/,....awesome keep writting I will cover you with my blood,not only because |
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Defective Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 73Salisbury NC |
I tried to go to your xanga but it only had ThirdLibra512, that you? |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
hey, good job, as usual, and really sad. keep writing =) - River Running out of pain |
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Third Libra Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 125South Carolina |
Thanks for reading and replying, it means a lot!! oh, and my xanga site is www.xanga.com/third_libra Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
wow, amazing. neva read any of urs.... this is wicked stuff. post some more... id love to read them. hardcore dude. darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Really enjoyed this it spoke deeply.. Isis |
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Third Libra Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 125South Carolina |
Thanks a lot ya'll. Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
thus obscurity |
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Paper Tiger Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 77 |
Third Libra, you wouldn't happen to be a fan of A Perfect Circle, would you? By the way, interesting poem. We see much, observe little, and perceive less. |
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Third Libra Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 125South Carolina |
Thank you both! oh, and yea. A Perfect Circle is one of my favorite bands. Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear. |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Very dark, very powerful words. I enjoyed. Still, our lovely secrets be painted upon the walls permanently By all of this world may it be seen, though it be so blind, burned into thus obscurity To remind me of the bittersweet kisses and of the razorblades so rusty and bloody Still of the time we danced in the dark for our hollow secret love WOW !! clever stuff. The other stanza's were great too. |
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Third Libra Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 125South Carolina |
Thank you muchly! Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear. |
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Paper Tiger Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 77 |
I love the mood of this poem! I really hope to see more from you in the near future. We see much, observe little, and perceive less. |
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Third Libra Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 125South Carolina |
Thank you muchly! Means a lot! Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear. |
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Destinys_Fallen_Angel Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 75Boise Idaho |
good poem very interesting and sad...i liked it Yahoo messenger: destinys_Falen_Angel |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Let's see, what can I say that everyone else hasn't already said...nothing. I agree with them, it's very excellent writing here! I really liked this poem. Especially the line, "you could never save me for long." Thanks for sharing. W.W. |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
Absolutely...amazing... ~J.Lynn  There is not ONE person in this world that you cannot live without. |
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