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Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-05-20 12:39 PM

Paranoid with blood dripping off your chin,
The fragile bones quake and you stagger forward,
A nightmare tears the beauty of your soul,
And all you see is replay, rewind, fastforward,
Your hands drenched in salt tears,
Poured silently from your ruddy eyes,
Unfocused but proud of you’re current state,
I can’t help notice as you limp blindly past.

Stained with the blood of unheard affection,
Deaf to the wild calls breaking the moonlight,
Blind from white-hot anger,
Mute to all that cross you dangerously,
Paralyzed from fear,
You strike reality’s chord with your singed fingers,
Playing off your behavior,
As a gentle game meaning no harm.

Defenseless and weak you are shrouded by clouds,
With billowy architecture and a snow-white complexion,
Unseen to the naked eye storms are brewing,
The eyelids flutter through guilt but you shrug it off,
Like the acid rain burning holes through your rugged skin,
I sit calmly anticipating your every move,
I’ve seen this movie before,
The beast and the victim,
Silent but for the screams,
The beast and the victim,
Who’s who?

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

1 posted 2004-05-20 12:55 PM

woah

amazing

i think that wat id look like if u stripped off my skin, leaving my soul bare, im afraid of that yaknow, someone actually seeing me like that, thats why im trying to get better, be a better person and all that.

i loved the poem, amazing.
wow

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

[This message has been edited by Nan (05-24-2004 06:30 AM).]

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-05-23 01:07 AM

LOVED IT MATE!

you are so amazing

you have such a way with words and i just really envy u right now. i really wish i could rite with that intensity and variety of words. love the strikes realitys chords with ur singed fingers. BEAUTIFUL

LOR

"It would make those who listen to it doze into a land of rivers, kund fu and unicorns, eventually making the listener pe is his/her pants - Brandon B

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2004-05-23 10:03 AM

Scarey thought....even scarier that it holds so true,,,,,,,very good write.

Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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