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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-05-19 04:50 PM

I'm staring at this wall of failure
I know I can handle it
Just push through
Slowly ease through
Through the blades of hate and judgement

Open my skull wide enough for 2 by 4's
And build my new world
Plant flowers and paint a rock
Date of birth and my name
It just feels so right

Crack open this wall of limitation
See what I just can't have
And pretend its mine
So warm and cozy
Slipping straight through life
To the last bit of rope
Which always holds firm

Truth set me free
Alive in this foggy world
Not so much polutant as debris
What I used to be is far behind
Conquering the depths of Hell
So much spite

Happiness and love and judgemental punishment
Discipline I need my hurtful shame
But don't make it so rough
Trickling blood....
Drips and washing me clean
Again I think I'm free
Just outside that wall
Window

Broken free
Nervousness
Scratch
Take a peek
Freak
Freedom

No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

1 posted 2004-05-20 03:46 PM

hey, this is really intense, I like it and I can totally understand it. (probably more than I should) but yeah, keep it up. ttyl

- River

Running out of pain

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2004-05-21 05:33 PM

enjoyed this greeny!!! well done

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

3 posted 2004-05-22 10:43 AM

welll i enjoyed reading it so much ,, well i wanted to ask you something,,,my other poem that you replied on was'nt that nessecary to put a girl from iraq ,,i was kinda thinking is it right to judge???,,,well you dont know me ,,and i dont think its right,,well all im asking for is just dont judge anything or anyone only by the way there people are or the beauty or anything it is'nt right...well keep up the great poem and i love this poem...with all my respect

peace

I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2004-05-23 06:04 PM

thanx eor, river, and palestinian chick its been awhile since Ive written anything. Thanx for the replies

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