Death came wearing blue velvet carnations

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Dark Poetry #4

Death came wearing blue velvet carnations

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2004-05-23 08:27 PM

Death came wearing blue velvet carnations
reveling a life full of despair.
All written on a
hand labeled sign.
Holding dream-like saints bound and hostage.
Like crusted words from stones of tyranny.
It carried him soft and true.
Eclipsed by destiny’s final crease,
his offerings were his in blue.
Did he know?

Could he know?
Where the mountains left realm.
Those offerings from the table of notions.
The key to the stable of forgiveness-
lamented truth.
Deeply centered within our decisions,
providing our endless breath.
When the answers are covered by lineal
Crossroads.
Like this stop sign crowned,
to this, his corner.
Asking for our own redemption
from the spirit in his eye’s.
Moments of deliverance
For everyone called who?

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

1 posted 2004-05-24 05:23 PM

this is...solid...hardcore awesome. I'm adding it, great job!

- River

Running out of pain

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2004-05-25 02:23 AM

I haven't read anything from you in a while and I thought it was about time, but I think its a bad idea to go to a show and come back all beat up then try to concentrate on poetry. I want to read this again later.

GIS

No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2004-05-25 11:09 AM

This one is kinda like your name, mystic. Nice write. Beautifully done.

GIS

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

4 posted 2004-05-25 04:47 PM

havent seen anything form you in a while wayne, not to mention i havent been on in a while...anyways, i like this, there is something differnt about this, it parts from the style i am used to seeing by you, but i did enjoys this...really dark overtones...nice write

Beauty is truth, truth beauty

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