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Dark Poetry #4

To My Family

Defective
Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 73
Salisbury NC

0 posted 2004-05-14 10:45 PM

I tried to make this
as painless as possible
but this thorn in my side
has broken my heart
again

Three weeks
20 days
480 hours
till I'm free of this
place

I never meant to hurt you
and this isn't because you did something wrong
and it isn't because I don't love you
it's because I feel like I'm suffocating here
and this isn't where I belong

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2004-05-15 11:06 AM

I feel for you....

and I hope when you get to where you are going you will indeed be happy....but remember too, it is never easy for a parent to let a child "go" they only want the best for you....

~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
~~**~~

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-05-16 01:25 AM

I really liked this, and i agree with greeneyes on this. It is very hard...
kissa

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