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lil cherry Member
since 2002-10-02
Posts 86Ont, Can. 
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There’s something behind my eyes Something you can’t see Something no one understands I’m not picture perfect I’m not a sweet little innocent girl I’m not as naïve as you seem to think I am I’ve seen death I’ve seen destruction I’ve seen pain Sometimes I dream about the end About not having to live with this past Not having to live alone in these feelings But then I realize how different things are now How much I’ve changed How hard I’ve worked to escape all that But no one realizes it No one knows what I’ve been through They think I’m average I’m not average Far from it I overcame great obstacles I am stronger than them But I am weak to them I want to be them I want my smile to be real I want my innocence to be intact I want to have hope for the world It’s too late for me though I’ve seen too much There’s no going back The world is an ugly place Pain and suffering are rampant And no one tries to fix it People complain about the world When they’ve never seen it But that’s all they do, complain I’m tired of watching people sit around Fight for what you believe in Stand up for your fellow humans I’m a hurt lost little girl Why did no one save me? How did I slip through the cracks? I had to save myself I had to deal with knowing the world is a terrible place No one stood up for me I am strong I changed, I saved myself I may be young, but I’m certainly not naïve |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I think i have read this b4. I loved it. It was amazing, i can relate to every part of that poem... kissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Great declaration. Like the attitude. There is this same moment in every "thinking" person's life. |
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LucidityNow Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 118Canada |
Hands down to you sis, I'm with you all the way. Those of us who are tired of averting our eyes need to pick the rest of the world up and stick their noses in the pain, just as we would to a dog that has pooped on the rug. I can feel your want to go back, want for ignorance, but on the large scale, ignorance only makes this world's malice increase, until it's bursting at the seams as it is now. Great poem! and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me... |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
Very powerful poem there. Hope to read more of you |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
I feel this one sister...it's like you wrote about me! good job =) i like. - River Running out of pain |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah this world isn't very great. Actually the vast majority of this world sux. I would say something sweet but. no this world definitely sux. GIS |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
~Lol~ I agree with GIS. This world does definately suck... for the most part anyways. kissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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