Dark Poetry #4 |
yet another dimension |
River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Self mutilation of will hold my pain in a metal box tie it down and watch it glow spill the rain on shards of sand fill this mind with regrets of tomorrow shaking, burning hold my hand feel the ashes falling down through my winter weathered hair I sink beneath the sea and drown slowly breath the dimming air clouds fall out of a pale black sky and stars sing haunting melodies as they fade behind myths of drows and black fairies swimming through my false reality I surface in a fog yet another world inside of me yet another dimension of sadness lost through endless spaces of time because in this place of worry time is history and gone shadowed by thoughts of being near ever near the passion of you in only I can gaze into your eyes hear the beat of another heart and pray it never dies do you want to know me? do you care about these things that cage me up and set me free? do you want to know me? I want to know you open your heart and let me inside Running out of pain |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
wow.. the imagery in this was amazing... I could almost see everything going on.. wow. I loved this...i think i will save it. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I don't exactly get on everyday anymore partly because my computer seems to have picked up a touch of schizophrenia and turns itself off when it likes. Its cut as dry as possible. No fantasy, or pretend world of how great or bad everything is, just real. Nice piece. GIS No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless |
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KuruShio Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110 |
a bottle full of awsome, go get drunk on it. Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
thanks guys...greeny, i don't hold it against you, lol, kuru, actually getting drunk doesn't sound very bad right now. then again maybe not. oh well. ttyl. - River Running out of pain |
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