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who should i go with?
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who should i go with? |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
i wish i could run away from everyone. people are wanting me to go wayz and wayz.. but i cant agree . who should i go with? i dont want to hurt anyone ..but i ratherhurt myself.. who should i go with?? people say we care ,but can i trust them? people say we love,how can i not know the truth? i been with them all my life... but maybe they want something.. maybe they want even more than anything.. im scared to live alone ..im scared to fail everyone with my stupid mind... should i go with people who helped me and truly loved me,but what if they are just going to play a game on me??... im scaredd!!!! |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
cool piece |
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Destinys_Fallen_Angel Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 75Boise Idaho |
good write, i'm new here i'd love your opinion on my works...i hope to hear from you soon Yahoo messenger: destinys_Falen_Angel |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Nice work. we all feel this way sometimes. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
this is like someting a little girl would write after coming out of somewhere like Iraq. It sounds sweet and innocent and like its searching for someone to trust GIS No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless |
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LucidityNow Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 118Canada |
Wonderful poetry! Forget other people. Think for yourself, whatever is ethical and moral to you, is what is right. Don't let anybody ever tell you otherwise. and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me... |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
hi,, well thank u all for ur replies... green ..its not right for you to say that...a girl from iraq??...why r u judging when u cant see??...even though im not from iraq but i respect people from iraq and people in america ..im not races ..so please just respect alittle ,,,just alittle .....i was raised in america and still am an american,and i truly dont think people from america are better than the people in iraq or even better than anyone..no-1 is better than any-1 and u have to know that...just give alittle love to the world,and especiallly urself...well thank u anywayz and may god bless u all.. peace wth all my love and respect |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Sweet: I thought this was really good. It made me think thats for sure. I agree everyone is equal! Take care  Lisa ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
This was good. I liked it. The flow was a litle edgy, but all in all it was pretty good! P A E U !!! ~lol~ e c o t Kissa-  I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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