Dark Poetry #4 |
Lost Memories |
KuruShio Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110 |
Who comes, came before, comes again, never went Returns in time, to places past To overmind, to make it last Green they trim, brown they wet A garden of sun, yet I forget To lament the loss of singular plant To die of thirst in a sea of storms To ride the wind, to feel warm Forgotten petals, crushed and bled, Stain the path, behind me red Scream, scream, for the children left behind Cry for them if you can, ive forgotten Cry for me if you can, ive forgotten Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless. |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
It really has a good flow to it and liked it a lot! |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Wow. I really liked this. I loved the cry for me if you can part at the end. It was brilliant. I loved it. Kissa~ I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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