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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
i cant breathe needing you next to me i cry wanting you here with me i die when the stars come out i hide and scream beneath my covers of my bed tears drench my pillow screams fill my ears while they strain to hear your voice cus its fading from my memory your photo discarded from my shelf it inflicts to much pain on my forever broken heart i paint scars on my body with a shard of glass write your name with my blood in the hope you'll notice what you do to me i struggle to stay above the water i cant breathe *ok yes i know its set out wierdly but thats how i wanted to be... and the title sucks but this is my "festive post" for the season k? thanks if you read this* nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
at least your writing aye well i enjoyed it nonetheless i liked the layout actually and i liked how you expressed the pain and needing through the poem.. i like how you do that well as i waste away with constipation of the mind, you are off writing beauties like this. brill laura you're the only one keeping me alive |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Ouch about the waste away with constipations. Pray you get better. darkness- its like a fast ripping of flesh. And doing it quietly. I used to write like this. I think you might remember some of it. But if the intent was blood and gore, you achieved your goal. -GIS My guitar's name is Jennifer. |
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