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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Its a little friction A freight train through a tunnel The power of being right And a wand handed glass A little curve On top of a rushing smile A solid figure From reality Into supernaturality Hear the scream When you're intentional Open this tiny crack And relax Just be, Happy, Beautiful, Jesus, Love, Understand and don't be confused Listening to the ticks What used to be has been transformed And molded into me My guitar's name is Jennifer. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
oh wow. epiphony happening here... "time has a tendency to buff us about like delicate delinquents in fragile bottles that break..." but what is time? tick... tick... tick... i like the word here. almost as much as now. this was incredible, craig, and i will forever love the last two lines. they were awesome! and, by the way, my guitar's name is geraldine...i call her "deenie" for short, and i named my microphone mike...lol of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
duude! now that was cool. i love reading your poems! keep 'em coming laura you're the only one keeping me alive |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
oooo loved it!!! awesome opening line... it even sounds great to say it out loud... *gets shivers all over* your stuff is always bloody great Craig love and empathy sophie merry christmas nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Mikael, lol- Yeah I believe I get the epiphony. I say I believe because I'm not exactly sure, but I believe I get it. And actually my guitar was being a pain so I was thinking about renaming it "Tom." Tom sounds appropriate for something thats an aggravating pain in the rear, but I think its actually doing better with the new strings so maybe I should call it "Ashley". Laura- Thank you. I love it when people enjoy my poetry, and then instead of saying something like, "dude, what the Hell are you talking about." they say, "keep'em coming" Thats cool. Thanks Sophie- You know what would have been cooler? If in your response you would have said, "Gets shivers FROM all over" lol. Thanks and merry Christ-mass to you too. lol. -GIS My guitar's name is Jennifer. |
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