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*Inque Monroe*
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0 posted 2004-04-09 11:17 PM

(This poem is about something very close to me(family), SoulSepulchre (My Fiancee) knows, but its not about him. PLEASE COMMENT!!)

I'm so tired of being the one everyone realises upon,
I'm so tired of being the one who is beat upon,
I'm so tired of being the one who is hated for the sake of hate, everyone uses me and
everyone abuses me,
I'm hated and betrayed,
I'm smothered with the pressure of making you happy.
I've been with you for so long,
yet I've been alone all along,
you left me to die,
to cry,
alone on this cold street,
you used me you abused me,
you abandoned me,
Such cruelty.
© Copyright 2004 Victoria Ware - All Rights Reserved
Fleur
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since 2004-04-09
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1 posted 2004-04-10 12:54 PM

.....very unique.. I liked it! -it's my feelings right now, seriously, I love it...
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