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*Inque Monroe* Junior Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 43No where special |
(Incase you are wondering NO this does NOT support suicide, I'm not even sure she dies.) Here I lie I dream of nothing but you Nothing but your eyes Nothing but your face I wish to hold you To hold you so tight But your gone No longer in my sight My dreams are like purgatori A lost life of which I loved God, I wish I had you. But its over, we're done, you left, my whole world has come undone When you left you took my soul and now here I lie waiting for the last drop and for me to die and while I lay here growing oh so numb I dream of your smile Your touch upon my skin your lips pressed to mine I know its wrong, this shouldn't be done Please come and save me I wait and I cry But nothing ever happens The phone never rings The door never knocks You've forgotten me I feel so numb. What have I become? |
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TasteOfOctober Member
since 2003-06-24
Posts 94 |
BRAVO...I felt that. I am not a man because I am of men. I am a man because I am of the Spirit, among men. |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
beautiful...wow...*tear* ~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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Soul Sepulchre Junior Member
since 2003-10-19
Posts 29Tennessee, USA |
Beautiful, depressing, and your style. Great work as always baby, ^^ -hug hug hug- keep it up - well, not so depressingly, but yeah, lol. Love ya. Jeremy - |
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~*DrAgOnFLY*~ Junior Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 29Haven of Abyss |
seems everything i read these days reminds me of...well you know. "the pain is gone, yet the memories live on" its all so bittersweet *sigh* it's a good one... "You laugh because I'm different, I laugh because you're all the same" Forever 'N Always <>< ~*DrAgOnFLY*~ [This message has been edited by ~*DrAgOnFLY*~ (10-31-2003 09:09 PM).] |
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*Inque Monroe* Junior Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 43No where special |
Thanks |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yes...she dies in one way or another...I know "her" well, very personally |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Amazing... I felt this.... I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
....Heartfelt Hollow, "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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toxic_outroar New Member
since 2004-03-22
Posts 6 |
i feel this i really do, went through the exact same thing. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I liked this, well done. "I...I bleed...For no one..but myself...For me and no one else!"~ MudVaYne |
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Fleur Member
since 2004-04-09
Posts 103 |
You can not imagine how much I cried when I red your poem. This poem is like written to me, and of my situation right now.... -he left.... and will never ever come again... ohh.... |
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*Inque Monroe* Junior Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 43No where special |
Fleur, I'm sorry it made you cry..I didn't think it could have that affect, I think most girls (and alot of guys to girls) have been in this situation, I know I have and I felt like I wanted to express it though words and I guess it worked. I'm sorry the situation in my poem happens to be yours now. As to everyone else, Thank you for the feedback and please give feedback on my others as well. ^_^ What does it matter, we will all die in the end anyway. |
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