Dark Poetry #4 |
Darkness is watching |
silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
Darkness is on my side deep thick eyes watching over me penetrating thickness with uncertaintity Darkness is watching slipping through my mind enveloping me so i cannot fight Darkness is breathing heavily into my soul developing a sense of insanity Darkness is fighting slicing deep into my untarnished flesh biting away all sense of feeling Darkness is coming to find a broken link depriving me of sight Darkness is screaming rusting my ears with pain lengthening my will to leave And darkness has won. Silhouetted by Deception |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
hey this is great! I'm sure our own darkness_witch will love this as well, lol. - River sleep my precious slumber |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
lol she helped write it with me!!! lol!!! crack up Silhouetted by Deception |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
hehe!!! lol thats quite good river... it came out well lor!! You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
"Darkness is watching slipping through my mind enveloping me so i cannot fight" Very nice. ~Vampire Kisses I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Ohhhhhh love this is awesome, we are all being stalked. I will see you later. unless the untimely wrath of death descends upon me and takes away my very own dancing limbs and beating heart, then maybe, when the lightening crashes inside my body, i may not ver see you again. Oh except if there is such a poposterous thing as an afterlife, then maybe, i will see you again. However long the night, the dawn will break. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
LOL BUT THERE IS!!! AND THERES A MAP TO GUIDE YOU AROUND THE WORLD!! AND DANCING CLASSES "They'll love you just the way you are, if your perfect" - Alanis Morisette |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I really love this poem. Especially the end. Thanks for sharing, this one's going in my library. W.W. |
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