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Dark Poetry #4

from the world who never loved

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

0 posted 2003-10-03 08:03 PM

And it was never right
To feel the empty god
On the empty cross
Filled with empty drugs
And an empty death
Because I am empty
You must be too
Because I am filthy
I’ll cut right through
Maybe these are just
The memories
Of the life I never had
And it was never right
To fill the empty souls
On an empty cross
Full of empty drugs
And a hope of a filth-less death
Because I am dying
You must not be
Because I am ugly
You’re so pretty
Maybe these are just
Collections of nothing
From the world who never loved

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-10-03 08:43 PM

Interesting...read like lyrics to me, and I thoroughly enjoyed.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-10-03 08:59 PM

this flowed incredibly.
amazing.
these words felt so real.
I'm there with you.

[This message has been edited by Lexy (10-03-2003 08:59 PM).]

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