Dark Poetry #4 |
watermelon |
Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Maybe I should write a song about how life is cruel. And the air is punishing me. A big spalsh of air, as I collaspe. Not today, I won't complain. I won't label it good or bad. I'll be the girl sitting up on the roof, eating watermelon. to be continued.... |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
In the days of "flower power", we sometimes sat on the roof and played cards or monopoly. Watermelon would have done nicely for "the munchies". I enjoyed the read, well done, as usual. coyote 8) "Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Not today, I won't complain. I won't label it good or bad" Oooh. Smiling, I was just talking about this. May you write an ending that serves you well. I like the possibilities of "to be continued..." |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
watermelons...not wuite as sour...but still good. And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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