Dark Poetry #4 |
Bleed Me Dry |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
i'm done waiting for you every second of every hour of every day i'm tired i just want this to go away your words pierce my heart like cupids arrow bleed me dry but it wont make any difference i don't want this anymore i don't want you anymore.. |
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Jelfling Junior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 21Indiana |
I really liked this poem, but it might have been better if you had gone into more detail about why you were done with them. |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
i dnt think u need to add y its fine with out it it allows you to make ur own meaning for the reason your done. it shows great skills as it brings the reader into the poem great work xoxLORxox |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
I love the mystery of the poem it doesnt need to say why I think. I felt a lot of pain coming through this poem I liked it alot hardcore darkness |
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