Dark Poetry #4 |
Witch hunt |
Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
I clutch at the diminishing light trying to win this tiring fight chest pounded and broken and i'm dying lips swollen and cracked but i'm trying i feel a shadow cast over my face my heart quickens to a panicked pace breath leaves my lethargic lungs i hear a thousands of waggling tongues as heat licks at my flesh like a dog 2 a bone and your sickly voice cold begins 2 drowne but for you my mind is closed it always has been i supposed i try not to cry because i know im losing but my mind wont give up keeps refusing then a happy light clear and free has encircled itself around me and now i see the flames devour and eat but i feel nothing only a sad defeat but i am 2 far away to feel this pain the witch in their hearts has been slain |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
SUITS U SOOO BAAAD!!! LOL ITS SOO UU BEXUS reed mine! LUV LOR xoxLORxox |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
AND U REMIND ME OF MY GOOD FRIEND TABITHA!!!! LUVD IT MANNNN xoxLORxox |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Dear Gothika_07 Great piece of work. Keep it up. I will look for more of your stuff. Loved it! Sylvia |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
hey AS A WISE ONE LASS ONCE SED SOOOO YOU BEX!!!!! hehe so classic you... loved the twist at the end keep ,posting catch u on the flipside |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I agree with everyone else this was good. I don't get on that often but I'll be looking for more of your work when I do. GIS Hatered and lies go hand-in-hand, while love is always truth. |
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Vagabond Member
since 2004-01-23
Posts 163 |
Poe! Vagabon the Lost One |
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NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England |
That was sooo cool i love it. cant wait to read more of your stuff. |
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