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prize
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since 2008-11-21
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0 posted 2008-12-01 06:35 PM


An obsession...such thinking!
I continue to ponder relentlessly - BUT WHY?
Tiring and grueling, my head won't stop spinning
I can't ever stop...though I endlessly try...

Horrible visions...so menacing and undoing!
How can I think that!  What if...could it be?
So many thoughts keep collecting and pooling
Might a compulsive act erase my anxiety?
    
The emotional pain is tremendously crushing...
I cave inside – my soul fearful, erased,
Controlled by the demon’s clutch, never-ending-
Until I decide to commit an act of escape.

Without thought I unleash the plan I can bear.
Irrelevant, the self-harm, once the act is done...
My shell broken flows with blood and with tears,
The devil again has most certainly won.


(I wrote this poem when my bf and I were using...thanks for reading, P)

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axi
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since 2008-11-16
Posts 43
NewYork
1 posted 2008-12-02 10:09 AM


this line to me is amazing...

Until I decide to commit an act of escape.

an act of escape...those 4 words are so meaningful to me and a great way to explain that situation...


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