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hoody
New Member

since 2008-11-28

Posts 6

0 posted 2008-11-28 02:58 AM

Grace turns me away
And Hell rejects me
Purgatory doesn't want me
So I'm left outside all
With no where to turn
No shoulder to cry on
No hug to comfort me
No more long nights talking
And contemplating
The meaning of this Journey
That we've been put on
With no map to guide us
Treading long worn paths
That lead to nowhere
Everyone said its the Journey that counts
But the Journey is getting tiring
And I wish to rest
Lay under the stars
Or a glimpse of what my purpose is
I thought it was to make people happy
And yet I always hurt some
Trying to please all
I failed
Not me
But them.

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

1 posted 2008-11-28 03:09 AM

That's one helluva first post.

You can spend your days pleasing others and your nights spackling over the hole in your heart and all you'll get is insomnia and some good poetry. And spackle everywhere.

The only meaning we have in life is the meaning we give it.
You don't have to figure out where you're going or where you'll end up. Just know where you are and where you want to go. The journey will take care of itself.

Welcome to pip. You couldn't be in a better place to find your path.

The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite.

hoody
New Member

since 2008-11-28

Posts 6

2 posted 2008-11-28 03:18 AM

Thanks for the comment and the welcome. I'm really glad I found this site.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-11-28 11:45 PM

What a brilliant first post, i'll be reading more.
Welcome to pip!

{~~*~~}

Miss.Emmalee

"Who the **** are you?!!?.. GET AWAY FROM MY LIMO!!"

prize
Member

since 2008-11-21

Posts 116

4 posted 2008-11-29 03:37 PM

another excellent write

this poem and the other poem (to me) are speaking from both sides, but each of us can be on both sides

just as I have been

great work!

P

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

5 posted 2008-12-03 08:15 AM

Very nice! I really enjoyed it can't wait to see more!

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