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HeliaHeart
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since 2008-11-16
Posts 53
Georgia

0 posted 2008-11-26 06:48 PM



It’s all relative in the end.
A dark uprising, a bloody shameful end
Time holds all Keys

Nothing left but an encroaching shiver.
Cold wraps its icy fingers.
Flickering wisps of warmth… fade.
A dark shadow, cradling lies… secrets.
That which holds no place in Time.
Time holds All Keys

The Doors, large overpowering Giants,
Mammoths in proportion
Their height, throwing shadows over the inhabitants,
Their secret oath.
Time holds all Keys


~Lia
"Live as if you were to die tomorrow, Learn as if you were to live forever"
-M. K. Ghandi

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GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
1 posted 2008-11-26 07:49 PM


Pretty. Reminds me of Poe in a way.
hoody
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since 2008-11-28
Posts 6

2 posted 2008-11-29 03:10 AM


I really liked this.  I don't know what it was, but it gave me some nice visuals.

I wear my scars proudly. They represent the battles through which I have gone, and I am proud because those battles I have won.

The Esoteric Being
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since 2008-07-22
Posts 34
MA, USA
3 posted 2008-12-03 09:19 AM


creepy in an ancient way, chilly too, I enjoyed this
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