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SilhouetteMarquis
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 32


0 posted 2008-09-27 01:01 AM


At peace with my most inner thoughts
With turmoil tossed and turned by trembling
Staring at the stains upon my filthy, dreary wall
Upon that point, I start remembering
All the horrid things I did to make the minutes fall
Aligned by such a stupid thing, Committed to a one night fling
How our troubled demons bring our deaths to us, enthralled.

Our hearts.

And never, I shall fall asleep
With ripping, tearing, shredding, stabbing.
My self-inflicted paranoia seems to only maul
Sharply, with your soft skin dabbing
My open wounds in which my soul come pouring out to all
But tortured minds of innocence (meticulous maleficence)
And be it so magnificent, when never knowing when our hearts will fall.
In love.

And be it so, upon this night,
It's silent, sickn'ing, simply scaring
Frightening with only such a glimpse to see our way
Though this light is oh so daring
Puncturing the darkness by the giver of the day.

And ringing of the choir's bells, and fading of the violent swells
And bid thee well, with faint farewells, and all you wish is that she'd say.

I do.
Our misery consumes our souls
With mirrored void and visions dreary
Time will surely tell of what fills up with dark decay.

Eating up our hearts, in theory
In fact, it only reaps our love, as much to our dismay
And praise whatever nightfall brings, and all of what the cricket sings?
And fleeing all by means of wings, it's time, I think, for me to bid
Adieu.

[This message has been edited by SilhouetteMarquis (09-27-2008 11:34 PM).]

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Persephone
New Member
since 2008-10-30
Posts 8
Ireland
1 posted 2008-10-30 05:25 PM


Damn beautiful work! Definitely a piece to be proud of, I hope of which you are
XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
2 posted 2008-10-30 08:40 PM


Hmmmmm..my vocabulary isn't that big but i could still understand most of it! lol.
Im just kidding, I thought this was beautiful. Great write and I hope to see more soon.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

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