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Dark Poetry #4

How Ironic

claireifyme
New Member

since 2008-10-24

Posts 4
USA

0 posted 2008-10-24 03:00 PM

I'm losing touch (can't stop holding on).
The world's spinning, spinning, spinning
out of control (I'm just along for the ride).
It rises in my throat and chokes back (chokes me?)
the feelings, going numb
as I (or this thing inside)
bend over and let loose the barrier that holds me back.

Back from what?
back from happiness
heartache
love
and (maybe I lied)
it's been gone for a while now
but the cold tile under my head (softer than any touch I've ever felt)
soothes the burning in my throat (heart?).
How ironic.

Stacey011
Junior Member

since 2008-10-27

Posts 18
Australia

1 posted 2008-10-27 07:25 AM

Hi, I am new here, this is my first post!

I really liked that piece. It was so raw with emotion, yet it left the reader with a lot to think about. It can have many different meanings too I suppose!

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-10-30 08:46 PM

Holy Crap! I LOVE this. I think I might just print it out and put it on my wall.

Amazing write, library. I'll be reading more.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

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