How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Sanctuary Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives

A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #4 » Time Sauce
Dark Poetry #4
Post A Reply Post New Topic Time Sauce Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Mr.Trichomes
New Member
since 2008-09-17
Posts 2
0 posted 2008-09-17 01:11 AM

A week on the brink of passionately motivated violence
Fueled from ominous irate thoughts
No where to turn
Old friends long gone, even the ever so tranquil bong
No amount of alcohol seems to make me calm
Dreadfully roused again long after dawn
I cannot help myself but be drawn to that idealistic hope
Why the hell won't she just call.
© Copyright 2008 Mr.Trichomes - All Rights Reserved
Persephone
New Member
since 2008-10-30
Posts 8
Ireland
1 posted 2008-10-30 05:14 PM

If I could applaud you, I truly would. I can undoubtedly relate to your every word, (which is another thing to point out, it isn't an easy task for most to say so much in such few words) but for some odd reason I'm also at a loss for words on what to say right now. So I'll just say 'excellence'. And I'm waiting on your next, I'd love to see more of your minds creations.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #4 » Time Sauce

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary