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Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
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0 posted 2008-09-21 08:43 PM


Torn

Given back my heart,
like damaged goods
worn and soiled at the party, then
torn on the way home.
Slept in and left on the floor.
The price tag lies in the dust
under the stove
© Copyright 2008 Tim W. - All Rights Reserved
Kaos
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 317
between space and time
1 posted 2008-09-23 03:23 AM

good write. for being so short there was an excellent portrayal of imagery.

"And behold, a pale horse, and the man who sat on him was Death, and Hell followed with him." - Revelations
Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
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2 posted 2008-10-11 05:27 PM

Thanks Kaos for your reply. Keepin my poems short and still saying what i want is always a goal of mine.

Yoin
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