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Dark Poetry #4

Love of the Lost

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

0 posted 2008-09-18 04:42 PM

Love of the Lost
My Soul It Has Cost
Broken By The Fire
Of A Heart Burning Desire

Death in your Kiss
Sorrow’s Sweet Bliss
Wondering How Long
The Tears Can Fall Like this.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-09-19 05:40 PM

It was a little choppy but I like it. Maybe if it was just in a different form it would be easier to read. Great poem.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2008-09-25 07:21 PM

OMG, I sooooo LOVE this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Live in the present but don't forget the future

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

3 posted 2008-09-26 10:07 AM

thank you!

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

4 posted 2008-09-26 08:41 PM

great poem. thank you for commenting on my poems. it means a lot. once again wonderful poem.
midnightdreamer

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no feat but rather welcomes it.

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