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midnightdreamer
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0 posted 2008-03-16 04:30 PM



I know what you’re doing
I can see right through you
You’re trying to treat me
The way I treated you

Now I sit writing this
While you smile the way would with me
But now it’s with him
My brother
You’re replacing me with him
You’re right, I’m wrong
I know that now
But you don’t have to do this to me

You said I meant the world to you
You said you would miss me if they took me
Now I wonder if those still apply

Please forgive me
Because you still mean the world to me
I probably don’t
If I do
You’re not showing it
Please forgive me

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

© Copyright 2008 Mariah Paige - All Rights Reserved
midnightdreamer
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1 posted 2008-03-16 04:36 PM


when it says  "you said you would miss me if they took me" i meant that when i little i was adopted and there was a chance that i couldn't stay with my mom.

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

hiddensmiles
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2 posted 2008-03-16 04:40 PM


great poem i really like this!!(library)
midnightdreamer
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3 posted 2008-03-16 06:27 PM


thanks.

midnightdreamer

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4 posted 2008-03-17 07:12 PM


Loved it. great job
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5 posted 2008-03-19 08:30 AM


this is sad. sometimes i have thought these same thoughts. great poem!

~Zach~  

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~



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6 posted 2008-09-25 12:17 PM


that's so sad!!!!
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