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You're right, I'm wrong
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You're right, I'm wrong |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
I know what you’re doing I can see right through you You’re trying to treat me The way I treated you Now I sit writing this While you smile the way would with me But now it’s with him My brother You’re replacing me with him You’re right, I’m wrong I know that now But you don’t have to do this to me You said I meant the world to you You said you would miss me if they took me Now I wonder if those still apply Please forgive me Because you still mean the world to me I probably don’t If I do You’re not showing it Please forgive me black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show. |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
when it says "you said you would miss me if they took me" i meant that when i little i was adopted and there was a chance that i couldn't stay with my mom. black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show. |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
great poem i really like this!!(library) |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
thanks. midnightdreamer |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
Loved it. great job |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
this is sad. sometimes i have thought these same thoughts. great poem! ~Zach~ |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
that's so sad!!!! |
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