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Saya_lost_soul
New Member

since 2008-06-12

Posts 7
BC, Canada

0 posted 2008-09-16 12:09 PM

Is there love in this world?
Where can I find love?
Nobody knows or responds.
The answer only lies
In my hands.

Please don't feel us
For we are fragile.
Don't touch us for you
Might shatter our
Wings of glass.
Don't notice us.
We don't care to know anything.
Just please leave us alone.

Then, the sun
Became dark and
The moon became
The colour of blood.

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

1 posted 2008-09-16 01:04 PM

The images this projected, was so wonderful.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

Ada'Do'Lis'Do'Ti
Junior Member

since 2006-07-04

Posts 24
germany

2 posted 2008-09-16 06:06 PM

Nice

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

3 posted 2008-09-18 04:35 PM

whoa...it pulled greatly @ my emotions. which only leaves me to wonder how you felt when writing it

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

4 posted 2008-09-20 01:37 PM

great words.
midnightdreamer

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no feat but rather welcomes it.

Dreamflight
Junior Member

since 2008-10-22

Posts 15
USA

5 posted 2008-10-22 05:41 PM

The title intriuged me, and didn't disappoint. I really like how you used that quote from "Revelation" at the end, I like mixing in quotes from all over the place. Got a huge book of them that I use to inspire me when I'm at a block.

Lovely!

I left it all behind, and never said goodbye...

HeliaHeart
Member

since 2008-11-16

Posts 53
Georgia

6 posted 2008-11-19 07:30 PM

I was curious when I saw the title, and it was very well used! The image forming in my mind while I read was crystal clear. It is beautiful, thank you for sharing it.

~Lia
"Live as if you were to die tomorrow, Learn as if you were to live forever"
-M. K. Ghandi

The Esoteric Being
Junior Member

since 2008-07-22

Posts 34
MA, USA

7 posted 2008-11-20 07:15 PM

beautiful... and heartbreaking

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The Esoteric Being

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