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pyre Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 136 |
I love And I don't know how to prove it The world rotates Around me Without me I want my love to be free This carnality in me Words in vanity Why don't you love me My divine destiny And "loser" spoken over me Breath of the clergy I just need the voice of Jesus To be honest The truth Of home She's quiet And she's waiting Does she pray? Am I prey? The strength of reality demands honesty and this path is in a shovel... |
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RMelick New Member
since 2008-11-16
Posts 4 |
Would you be open to some advice for this poem? |
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pyre Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 136 |
yes. always. its actually a song, but advice is always welcomed. Does she pray? Am I prey? The strength of reality demands honesty and this path is in a shovel... |
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