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Dark Poetry #4

near death experience...

pagan1
New Member

since 2008-07-19

Posts 3

0 posted 2008-07-19 07:15 PM

towards
the light
created by
lack of oxygen
to the brain
I thought
I saw an angel
but I did not
know her name...

holding
on tightly
to everything
by which I am defined
death encroaches
on the dreamlike reality
that I call
my mind...

reaching
for an escape
screaming for the womb
the fundamental truth is
everything ends
too soon...

I don't believe
in forever because
forever is a lie
but still I ask
the nameless angel
to embrace me
as I die...

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

1 posted 2008-08-08 05:26 AM

things come to an end

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

2 posted 2008-08-08 06:28 PM

I looooove the rhythm in this piece. The entire feel, really. Looking forward to more.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

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