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Dark Poetry #4

You Tell Me...

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

0 posted 2008-07-18 10:27 AM

You Tell Me...

And “accidental” overdose
Of something very strong.
That wouldn’t hurt,
Just falling asleep once again.

A simple loophole in a rope
Dangling from a balcony.
Very painful, short yet long,
But no going back.

The quick slice of a wrist
While lying on the bathroom floor.
Messy and very bloody,
A slow painful death.

So no it comes down to this...
What should I do?
Shall I stay here and endure emotional pain?
Or end it all and free from this torture hall?

You tell me...

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

PoetsPlay
Member

since 2007-12-22

Posts 56
California

1 posted 2008-07-20 12:18 PM

Some days I feel like this...I have thought about "offing" myself, but then I thought about all the things that I do live for. Remember those things, Star, and if you can't live for yourself, live for those that you'd hurt if you were gone. It was a really good poem, I'm glad you shared with us.

Alexandra

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

2 posted 2008-07-27 10:13 AM

I agree with poetsplay. There's always something to live for.
And this WAS a good poem.

There is power in the pen.

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