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Dark Poetry #4

Wildfire (revised)

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

0 posted 2008-07-26 11:18 PM

Wildfire (revised)

The leafy hues have wasted away.
Now only the ashes remain to play.

Hate-filled flames, conceived of greed,
consumed the proud giant and her unborn seed.

Even the elders, gnarled with age,
their wisdom displaced by insatiable rage.

The forsaken folk: Elm, Oak, and Pine,
All burned away, by fire so fine.

Orchards filled with succulent fruit,
torn down by a fiery brute.

Not enough laughter; Too many remains.
All because
of a few forgotten flames.

Fire hates all;
And gives only grief.

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

1 posted 2008-07-27 01:06 PM

great poem!!
midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

2 posted 2008-07-28 10:37 AM

This is really different, but still really amazing. Awesome write...not something I would have thought of but it still works. Great job, keep it up!

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

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