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Dark Poetry #4

Shadow "new arrangement"

Elias Nevermore
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since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

0 posted 2008-07-14 12:20 PM

One of my earlier works which I have decided to fix.

Shadows

There is a darkness that preys on each of us.
It brings to us a fear beyond imagination.
Its crimson radiance haunts and chills our spines
and our own fears come to full realization.

This black figure that follows our every move,
knows too well the secrets we hold dear.
It abuses our thoughts for its own ambitions,
of causing us terror by means of deadly premonitions.

With its unending power over the human mind,
the dark presence manipulates our every emotion.
Sanity is lost to those left alive,
and in the end you find yourself alone
watching the rest of your life pass you by.

"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;" -Edgar All

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

1 posted 2008-07-14 02:24 AM

I would love to see the original. This is very good... I enjoy your style.... your flow.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

Elias Nevermore
Member

since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

2 posted 2008-07-23 12:05 PM

Thank you may for your comment. The original was made probably 8 months ago.

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