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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA 
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you walk in, drop to your knees Crawl to My feet and worship Me. So proud am I of what you’ve become Building you with each leather caress. So proud I am of what I have done Creating you… My perfect pet. you kneel so still, need not be bound A whistle from the crop… you tense Leather meets flesh, you make no sound In pain you’ve found your lover’s kiss Taking pride in raping you My phallus forcing into you Let go, sweet boy… enjoy this pain Below My boot, where you exist Sparks from My Wand across your flesh Yes, My doll, you belong to Me I’ll burn My mark onto your flesh For you to savor in solitude Shower Me with adoration Hand to Me all control Give Me trust as I give you My little slut and yet My friend When you’re weak lean on Me Becoming Mine will set you free My hand inside I stretch you wide The heat of you envelops Me Your muscles tense around My wrist Open your soul I’ll set you free My knuckles hit induce sensation you know that you must hold it in I give the word and you explode Viscous pledge you belong to Me My little slut I’ll set you free No longer empty Nor out of balance We live in symbiotic harmony [This message has been edited by Mystress May (02-24-2008 09:53 PM).] |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
rv.... your earlier comments made me think of this poem that I'd written a short time ago for one of my boys who happens to be my favourite. it isn't very clean but it's raw and honest emotion.  ~~~May~~~ |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
Can't get any more honest than that MM. Nice work, you told everything without telling too much. Loved it. |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Thank you Seeker... and yes.... sometimes less is more. |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
goodness, may! you would frighten away a novice with your phallic tool. my only interest is in your verbalistic lashings and a simple burn from your linguistic cigarettes. |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
rv... I am not at all scary... I can be gentle.... ish hehe and sometimes my verbal lashings can be much harsher than the sting of a crop |
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megaskull Junior Member
since 2008-02-04
Posts 11 |
Some good stuff going on here, I was a little put off by the first stanza "so proud I am" Have you thought of maybe "So proud am I" or any of the other alternatives, just something about the original bugs me. The way you depict this scene is very unique, and fun. As I've said, it is very well. |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Megaskull.... I like your idea and made the change.... you're right, it does sound better! Thanks doll! |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
may, long ago the ancients used "wet leather" bondage as the method of choice in crucifixions. as the wet leather dried, the bonded one would slowly die from aphyxiation. though i love to feel your verbally hot breath lashing against my skin, i hope the linguistic moisture dripping from the adorable metallic adornments, on you tongue, will keep my leather bindings wet as my breath is being slooowly sucked away. |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
rv.... maintaining wetness is something that I am naturally inclined to do. It not only drips... it completely envelops.... once you are immersed, you either have to learn to breathe it as a fetus would the amniotic fluid of its mother, or you will drown. |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
ooooh! may, you are so pure at heart. you have that ability to grab hold of each moment. you are soooo, firm. if only i had more structure. beat me harder next time. i promise to be a good boy! [This message has been edited by r v wooo (02-27-2008 08:24 AM).] |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
haha rv.... pure at heart? Me? hehe that does make me giggle! and I give my best beatings to the boys that ARE good.... the ones misbehave get punished with neglect. you seem to be good, thus far |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I looked up a few words I didn't yet know and you are a monster inside... geez... -GIS |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Craig.... I have my moments hehe.... |
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firestorm Member
since 2008-02-26
Posts 109 |
I love the intense emotions your poem brought out-can't wait to read more |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
great poem!!!! keep up the good work!!!!!!! midnightdreamer black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Moments are especially good when they come extremely intense and there isn't much time between them... Then you have motion. Yeah, I'm showing my signature with every post... lol. |
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Reborn Junior Member
since 2008-04-01
Posts 13 |
Wow, that poem was certainly full of surprises. What an interesting (and bold) way of expressing the thoughts of the quintessential sadist. I wonder what poem the "boy" would come up with in this same situation. |
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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
I read this while listening to Nine Inch Nails - Head like a hole, and i think the poem and the song coincide rather well, i love this poem, and Mistress i must take my hat off to you and give you a standing ovation, this poem deserves it! Bravo! Can't wait to read more you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
I appreciated you stopping by and viewing my piece so much that I thought it only fair to do the same. This is an extremely intense piece of work that isn't for the weak of will or heart. I truly enjoyed the read it offered, simple yet structured, raw and to the point. I, too, could relate this to listening to NIN while reading more. There's a strange sense of sensuality at the end  "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Sir Vampire.... that is one of the greatest compliments you could have given me. I'm a huge NIN fan and that does make me happy. Jeremy.... you're very correct in that it's not for the faint of heart... but that's alright! Much of my poetry has that underlying sensuality. Of course I hoard a lot of it to myself. Some things I just can't bring myself to share. Check out my stuff in 'Behind Closed Doors' And thank you very much for your kind words. |
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