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Dark Poetry #4

The dark

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-06-05 05:05 PM

Deeper down into the darkness,
never will I see more light.
Dragged down by the screams of
the haunted, don't try to save
me because it's too late.
A knife, a cage, and the freedom
to die. Darkned pain, sickend lullaby.
No more light, no more suffering,
only emptyness.
I'm stuck forever, never breathing.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2008-06-09 10:37 AM

Its short and seems quite to the point not bad but are you new at this at all?

Kate

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-06-09 05:15 PM

No, I've been on pip for a while. But I just started writing last year...

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

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