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Dark Poetry #4

All that you have to say

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2008-06-03 01:30 PM

Black eyes you never really even tried

They walk away

As tears are falling from your eyes

Don't forget to rememeber the day

When you let everything go

And your fears just went away

You stand alone, by a shadow in the dark

You look around, theres no sound

And you start to forget who you are

Just let it go

Walk away

And all of your emeotions will show everything that you have to say

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2008-06-03 01:31 PM

This poem is about forgiving yourself and being able to stand up for yourself!

Kate

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-06-03 02:28 PM

Wow this is good. Great write.

"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

Written_In_Stone
New Member

since 2008-06-03

Posts 3

3 posted 2008-06-03 05:29 PM

I thought it was a poem that touched my heart and I thank you for sharing. There's not a thing that I would change about it. There's a strong message you've just shown in this poem.

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

4 posted 2008-06-04 10:54 AM

Thanks you guys I'm really glad you like it and of course my point of my poems is to have you enjoy it or feel the emotions!!

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

5 posted 2009-12-16 03:53 AM

wow I feel old!! I can't believe I wrote it!! It's really short!!

Kate

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