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Dark Poetry #4

Agitation and Frustration

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2008-06-04 10:59 AM

I'm very impatient

I can't wait very long

I don't even know my own strength

But I know I'm not that strong

I can't stand when things take forever

Or when I'm running out of time

The things that hurt me most

God why do I always have to rhyme?

To hear people say my name in hatred

Or to say anything at all

Just to let it go one more time

Just to let it all fall

I'm frustrated with everything

So now please let me be

You'll never understand

You'll never see

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2008-06-04 11:00 AM

Its about anger of course and being very impatient.

Kate

Britt_Brat
Junior Member

since 2008-03-05

Posts 37
Knoxville, TN

2 posted 2008-06-04 06:32 PM

its very good. at first I was some what confused but I get it now, and its a very good one

cut and bleeding

eternally_singing
Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

3 posted 2008-06-04 06:39 PM

I thought this was very good. It describes exactly how I feel at times.

At night a candle's brighter than the sun

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

4 posted 2008-06-05 09:06 AM

This is about letting out your anger and expressing how you feel. I'm glad you can relate to it.

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

5 posted 2009-12-16 03:52 AM

yea I still feel like this tons of times a day1! ugh!!

Kate

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