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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2008-05-30 01:15 PM


If I tell you

Would you tell me

everything that you have to say

I don't know how

If you know now

Will I ever be okay?

Its only one try

If I look in your eyes

And just let out what I have to say

If I tell you

Whats on my mind

Would you care

And what would you say?

And I've tried so hard

God I've come so far

To let you go

But should I let you know

I've tried to hate you

That never came true

Its so hard to let things go away

All the times we spent

I'll never regret

The times with you

I never thought they were true

I took things for granted

Never realized I had it

Until everything that just faded away

If I tell you

That I love you

Would you tell me how you feel

Or just turn away?

Kate

© Copyright 2008 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
1 posted 2008-05-30 01:17 PM


This has to be one of my favorites I ever wrote it truely brought out my emotions in this one. Hope someone likes it!

Kate

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
2 posted 2008-05-30 10:43 PM


i don't just like it. i love it!!!! i'm sure others will too!!

midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

eternally_singing
Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123
PA, United States
3 posted 2008-05-30 11:32 PM


Spectacular- I love it!

At night a candle's brighter than the sun

voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
4 posted 2008-06-02 10:33 AM


Thanks you guys I'm really glad you like it!! Like I said I'll try to write as much more as I can!!

Kate

wolfy09
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since 2008-06-10
Posts 93

5 posted 2009-05-14 06:15 PM


i LOVE it!!!!!!!!!
voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
6 posted 2009-12-16 04:00 AM


WOW FROM MY LYRICS!!

Kate

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