Dark Poetry #4 |
If I tell you |
voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
If I tell you Would you tell me everything that you have to say I don't know how If you know now Will I ever be okay? Its only one try If I look in your eyes And just let out what I have to say If I tell you Whats on my mind Would you care And what would you say? And I've tried so hard God I've come so far To let you go But should I let you know I've tried to hate you That never came true Its so hard to let things go away All the times we spent I'll never regret The times with you I never thought they were true I took things for granted Never realized I had it Until everything that just faded away If I tell you That I love you Would you tell me how you feel Or just turn away? Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
This has to be one of my favorites I ever wrote it truely brought out my emotions in this one. Hope someone likes it! Kate |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
i don't just like it. i love it!!!! i'm sure others will too!! midnightdreamer "It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon |
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eternally_singing Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123PA, United States |
Spectacular- I love it! At night a candle's brighter than the sun |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thanks you guys I'm really glad you like it!! Like I said I'll try to write as much more as I can!! Kate |
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wolfy09 Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 93 |
i LOVE it!!!!!!!!! |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
WOW FROM MY LYRICS!! Kate |
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