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Dark Poetry #4

black heart

angelfacegurl
Member

since 2008-04-17

Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI

0 posted 2008-05-24 08:54 PM

deep down i cry
the black heart of souls
i feel the pounding
to hold me gentle
deep inside my body
to unleash the pain
to fade to black
and pray they wont see through

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-05-25 03:44 PM

good job!

shakalakaboomboom
Junior Member

since 2008-05-19

Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A

2 posted 2008-05-26 11:18 AM

thats really nice

~Savana

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-05-26 11:33 AM

So many meanings in few ,little words. True poetry. Great job!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

4 posted 2008-06-20 08:20 PM

Heart rending. Thoroughly loved the emotion evoked by this short, strong piece.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

PoetsPlay
Member

since 2007-12-22

Posts 56
California

5 posted 2008-07-20 01:11 PM

I liked it. This was short, but filled with emotion as well.

Alexandra

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