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A vampire story.. chapter one
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A vampire story.. chapter one |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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"I know its not a poem but here's a story instead" Chapter one: Slowly as the sun receded among the silhouette of trees. A girl of the age of nineteen walks alone. "Why of all nights am I late to this one party?" She questioned herself while checking her purse for a mirror. Her red high heels clicked on the cobblestone as she drew out her mirror and checked her complexion. The wind was starting to pick up and blew her long, curly red hair. "Brr. It’s starting to get cold," she said while pulling at her tight long sleeve-shirt. "Maybe if I cut threw the city park I can be there on time for Cindy's party" She muttered to herself. She started to walk into the park. And walked along the long path of light poles. It was about a quarter to nine and the party started at ten. She walked past a bench where a couple of lovers kissed while the moon started to shine its pale moonlight. With a "Hmph" and a roll of her eyes she picked up her pace. She hated it when lovers did that in front of her. Suddenly she heard a rustling in the bushes that made her jump. She looked towards it to see a shadow behind the bush. "Is anyone there???" You could hear the fear in her voice. There was no respond... She started to pick up her pace. She never liked being outside after dark. But she really wanted to go to Cindy's party, whom being not as popular was glad to receive an invite. She could just see the park exit about 10 feet away, a clear exit. No one was walking her way so she started to pick up her pace. She tried to not trip over the garbage that littered the ground so she was watching her steps carefully. Out of nowhere she bumped into a man. "Ahh!!" she screamed. "I'm sorry Miss for running into you, I wasn't looking where I was going." The man tried to say while the girl pushed him away. Just being aware to what had happened, she stopped being frightened. But didn’t lower her guard. For she knew something was wrong, she could just sense it. The girl just starred at the man with a vacant look. He was tall with dark clouded eyes. His skin pale as death. The man wore a dark, long, leather jacket with a blood red scarf. His short spiked hair matched his dark jacket. "Oh I'm so sorry. I'm sorry I screamed, you sort of startled me," she said with a blush. The man chuckled. "Its quite all right. I tend to frightened my self often too." He smiled. He had such a gorgeous white smile. She just had to stare. "Are you all right? You don't look too well." She snapped out of her trance. "Oh yes, yes I'm doing fine I'm just in a little bit of a hurry and I’m sort of afraid of the dark." She said while staring into his deep dark eyes. "Do you want me to escort you to your destination?" He asked with concern. "Um. Well." She said while fidgeting with her hands. "Um sure if you don't mind." "Very well then. Um. I don't think I got your name." She glanced at him once again and said, "Melody. That’s my name." "Well its nice to meet you my dear, Melody." She started to blush. "Awe stop it! Your making me blush!" Melody said while giving him a little friendly push. They just both laughed. "Well we must be on our way. So off we go." He held out his hand. She gracefully accept it. And they walked out of the park. -------------------------------------------------- I'm still writing this story so chapter 2 will hopefully come out soon. Hope you guys like it! |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
cool story!! love it!! midngihtdreamer black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show. |
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wolfy09 Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 93 |
nice write not a poem but awesome story keep writing cant wait to read the rest |
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PoetsPlay Member
since 2007-12-22
Posts 56California |
Awesome story, I love vampire novels! Alexandra |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Well written.... I haven't read part 2 yet.... but you've put out the hook! Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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