Rose Petal glasses .. lets see your real beauty.

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Dark Poetry #4

Rose Petal glasses .. lets see your real beauty.

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-05-11 12:16 PM

Under your spell..

You made me believe the lies you held under.

You took away my soul and mind to used it to your own advantege.

How can you be so cruel?

But even in my anger I'm under your spell.

Like rose petal glasses, I only see your beauty.

Your siren voice sings a song..
a song of sweet,loving death

My breathe is leaking but I still feel good enough for you.

You torture me so sweetly but i can't let this go..

Can't wake from this dream.

Because i couldn't say no to you.

You made me feel good for once in my life.

Your velvet kiss of death kills me softly.

How can I say no to you..

Your claimed your prize..
My heart

But let it drop to the ground.

Let it drown in its sorrow..

You don't care at all..

But i still feel good enough for your love.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

1 posted 2008-05-11 06:56 PM

This is full of emotion. It says alot and I'm sure alot of people feel like this. This is an amazing poem, keep up the awesome work!

~*Julianna*~

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2008-05-11 10:12 PM

amazing write

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

Again
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since 2008-05-13

Posts 47

3 posted 2008-05-13 07:27 PM

Wow that is deep....you are going to make me cry =(. You have a way of stating the words just so they touch my soul, that is a true poet. Good job. *two thumbs up*

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