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Dark Poetry #4

Demise

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-04-17 10:55 PM

Staining my hands
crimson flows, down
my arm and onto the
forest floor. No one
to witness this death,
no one who cares to
save me. The voices
in my mind are whispering;
Alone is what you will
always be, alone is who
you are. No one cares
if you die, everyone
will move on.

Still dripping down
it floods the leaves,
spinning them till they
drown.
With no one to help me,
no one to hear,
Tonight is the night you
have all been waiting for.

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-04-18 07:47 AM

Hey, hey! this is reallly, REALLY good

~Zach~

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

2 posted 2008-04-18 09:02 PM

great poem!

midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

3 posted 2008-05-10 10:59 AM

I think its great!

again.on.death.row
New Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 9
Canada

4 posted 2008-05-10 11:38 PM

great write, good imagery... you seem really capable of writing those complex feelings down and making them make sense.

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

5 posted 2008-05-11 02:31 AM

really good write, everytime I read your poems I can see them being played out in my head

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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