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Dark Poetry #4

Killing Me

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-04-11 08:23 PM

You’re killing me strictly, slowly
and making it last;
dragging out the pain
until my last immortal breath.
Your fatal knife punctured in my
stomach, my gut wrenches
with the agony.  Slicing my chest
with your voice, letting me bleed
forever more.  With my breath
getting shorter, your smile widens
at the image of seeing me weaken.
I see those gleaming teeth, dripping
with blood.  You’re hungry for revenge
and you won’t stop at anything to get it.
I know it’s only a short time until I
disappear.  The last thing I hear
is your pernicious shriek
echoing in the moonlight horizon.

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-04-12 04:49 PM

wow this was ...graphic.. a little scary but this is dark poetry. right? but this is really good! great work!

~Zach~

x-tears-x
Junior Member

since 2008-04-13

Posts 43
England

2 posted 2008-04-13 05:13 PM

god.
great imagary.
i dont know how you do that.
WOW.

Yey.xxx

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