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For_Never
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0 posted 2008-03-12 10:46 PM



I like to do as i do
I feel I need too
it helps me deal
with what i can
and what i can't
yet who am I

she likes to feel
feel like in charge
charging in love
love in feelings
feelings returned
who is she?

she likes to do as I like do too feel like

and so one adapts
to control
to be
more alive
to feel when to fall
who am I?

I like to do as she does do to feel like

withered soul
lost may in summer snow
spring is gone, autumn came
winters here, I remain
she is gone, like the sun
moon has rose, I am done

I like to do, to be alive,  she is gone, now I die..

Edward A. Beerman 3/12/08

"..Hello...is there anyone out there?..."
Pink Floyd

© Copyright 2008 Edward A. Beerman - All Rights Reserved
fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

1 posted 2008-03-13 12:47 PM


I loved the flow to this. great job
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