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Dark Poetry #4

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Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

0 posted 2008-03-12 03:40 AM

these pills still swim
they still burn sometimes
but not for the reasons before
the emptiness feels like a crime

i don't go over-board like i did
but it still hurts like hell
when i end up in the bathroom
knowing again i've failed

failed at what i set foot to do
control my emotions, what emotions?
i don't feel anymore
just little simple notions

numbness is pain, you know...
so how do i know what's really there?
this fog has fallen within me
my answers don't seem to be anywhere

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-03-12 09:58 AM

Interesting poem. Your poem makes me think... which is good in my case lol

Have a nice day!

~Zach~

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

2 posted 2008-03-13 08:02 AM

Thanks F

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