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My last eve
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My last eve |
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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
The moon rises red this winters eve The beauty is so pure it can none deceive The light captivates me, the darkness shrouds me I am alone on this hill; this beauty is mine alone to see Below the moon a single star, a crystallized tear The moon is crying as am I, my tears like the moons are sincere I feel at home here on this hill, just me and the moon… Hushed whispers sharing my secrets, knowing it will end all too soon you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye |
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megaskull Junior Member
since 2008-02-04
Posts 11 |
Cool write! Good emotions, good vibrations!  |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
Sweet poem!!!!! Midnightdreamer black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show. |
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Venus1974 Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 79Tennessee, USA |
Nice Peace and happiness to us all, Venus |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
awsome poem! keep it up! ~Zach~ |
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