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Dark Poetry #4

Just a dream

Sir_Vampire
Member

since 2007-06-12

Posts 96
Johannesburg

0 posted 2008-02-19 07:35 AM

Whisper your desires into my skin
Can you taste my blood coursing within?

My body is yours do what you please
You bite me gently and smile as I fall to my knees

The reflections in your eyes hold me enchanted
I pray the honor of pleasing you is granted

You trace your hand slowly across my face
Helping me to my feet and taking me in your embrace

A kiss on my neck with your velvet lips
blood runs down my spine a drop from you lip drips

I feel myself fading into your arms, becoming part of you
Yet a know this cannot be, its too good to be true
That is when I awake and see you are not there
And the blood I felt is now only tears…nothing’s fair

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-02-19 04:27 PM

hmm interesting. the emotion in your words just simpley amazing! the subject of your poem is makeing me believe that the person in your dream is like a vampire (considering you said blood and your disire to please him/her made me think that). Am i right? Great poem!

~Zach~

KatKali
Member

since 2008-01-03

Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

2 posted 2008-02-20 11:36 AM

Beautiful, really, I don't know what else to say really.

Dark,
What does that mean?
Light,
What makes you so good?
Sin,
What is my Sin?
Only when you answer the first two will
you find the last.

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

3 posted 2008-02-22 06:46 PM

Very sensual piece, doll.... I enjoy it.

~~~May~~~

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

Venus1974
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 79
Tennessee, USA

4 posted 2008-02-22 09:23 PM

I like the passion...hated the end waaa LOL no really I loved how you put this toether.

Peace and happiness to us all, Venus

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