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voice2bheard
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0 posted 2008-01-16 01:21 PM


He would watch them everyday

Tell them stories, that would never fade away

Go outside and run around

So fast in circles til they fell to the ground

He didn't ask a question why

So he laughed until he cried

Sitting in a room all alone

Hears there voices over the phone

No matter how hard he'd try

Still they would laugh until they cried

Days go by one by one

He never thought he'd be so proud of his son

Getting older and losing touch

He knew for sure he gave him enough

Then one day he came back to visit him

Told him all the stories and places hes been

He told him my how the days go by

He remembers we laughed until we cried

A quiet room everyone gathers around

A tragic loss, but love still found

His son speaks about his fathers life

As remembers we laughed until we cried


Kate

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voice2bheard
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1 posted 2008-01-16 01:22 PM


This poem is fiction about trying to live your life the best you can that its okay to  smile and have a good time once in a while, but to enjoy it because it soon will be over

Kate

wisdomofthesword
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2 posted 2008-01-18 12:33 PM


I love it

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

voice2bheard
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3 posted 2008-01-18 01:10 PM


Thank you
fromme2U
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4 posted 2008-01-21 05:24 PM


wow very nice write!
voice2bheard
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5 posted 2008-03-11 01:30 PM


Thank you glad you enjoyed it!

Kate

voice2bheard
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6 posted 2009-12-16 04:24 AM


A STORY ABOUT A SONG I THINK ?

Kate

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